hi dara the shot looks a little bright overall to me. have you tried using a polariser filter or nd grad filters ? i never take any HDR shots without these filters, but not at the same time.:) you will get so much more colour and lots of life in your skies with a polariser filter also they are great for water shots for taking the glare of the water. hope this was helpful dara.
dara these are just a few quick edits i did tell me which one you prefer i know the difference is subtle but to me thats what makes good HDR shots that they look kind of real and not like cartoons.:)) but if you like the cartoon look i can send you an edit. let me know if you like any of these and i can send you the settings.